Learn From My Mistakes

My newest book is now available! Here’s the press release Milherst Publishing sent out:

He’s written more than a dozen books, including the highly acclaimed Terin Ostler/Fortannis fantasy series, the Teddy Roosevelt/steampunk adventure Big Stick, and the horrifically funny Bloodsuckers. He’s also edited a slew of great books, including the Fantastic Books anthologies Release the Virgins and Three Time Travelers Walk Into…, and he co-edited Across the Universe and two volumes of alternate Sherlock Holmes stories in the Baker Street Irregulars series… and that’s just his fiction output. All of that means he’s made-and learned from-the mistakes beginning writers usually make. And now, in this Learn From My Mistakes!, he saves you the time of making those mistakes yet again for yourself.

This collection of essays-written over several years, usually as he was making the mistake he talks about-give a wonderful overview of the entire process, from idea to writing, editing to publishing, and selling the book and building a career. Told in an accessible style, Ventrella is someone you want to have a conversation with, to pick his brain. And this book offers just those suggestions.

Recommended for beginning writers and those who want to level up their writing game.

Click here to order a copy!

My Boskone 2026 schedule

Boskone is a major science fiction convention in Boston that I used to attend all the time when I lived there. We moved in 1994 so it’s clearly been a while, but I’ll be back this year, and as a guest panelist instead of just a fan! The Guest of Honor is Greg Cox and my good friend Keith DeCandido is the Master of Ceremonies, and there are lots of other great writers and artists who will be there! Check out this list!

When I’m not on a panel, you’ll probably find me at the Fantastic Books table in the dealer’s room. Here’s my schedule (subject to change):

Tips for Writers Attending Cons (Friday 4 pm): Is this your first convention? Welcome! Stop in and learn about how to attend cons and meet your fans without generating too many “I can’t believe that new writer did that!” stories. Learn why you shouldn’t build pyramids of books in front of you when you’re on a panel and why doing things like using a tablet or a laptop to play videos while you’re on a panel is strictly verboten. With Joshua Bilmes, Janice Gelb, and Tricia J. Wooldridge

Make ‘Em Laugh (Friday 7 pm): In most science fiction/fantasy stories, Donald O’Connor doesn’t fall through a wall to make the audience laugh.  Instead, we might find someone screaming something like “Curse you and your surprising yet inevitable betrayal!” But sometimes, no matter how hard we throw the joke, it just doesn’t land. Humor is subjective which is what makes it
so tricky. Our panel of clowns writers will discuss the mechanics of humor and how to get your reader to laugh. With Randee Dawn, Daniel M. Kimmel, Robert V.S. Redick, and Steven Sawicki

Autographing session (Saturday 2:30 pm): with Theodora Goss and Walter Jon Williams

Censorship and How to Fight It (Sunday 11:30 am): For the first time in ages, our government has spoken out in favor of censorship. Has that impacted your writing (or reading or viewing)? What are some of the effective ways to counter censorship? With Kevin McLaughlin and Melinda Snodgrass

Interview with author Susan Moore Jordan

MICHAEL A. VENTRELLA: Today I’m pleased to be interviewing Susan Moore Jordan! After a lifetime as a musician, Susan wrote and published her first novel in 2013. In THE CAROUSEL TRIO, the author drew from her life experiences as a voice teacher and stage director. In 2017, Jordan shifted her focus to the Vietnam War in  MEMORIES OF JAKE and MAN WITH NO YESTERDAYS, a Finalist in the Wishing Shelf Awards and Semi-Finalist in the Kindle Book Awards.

In 2018, Jordan embarked on “The Augusta McKee Mysteries” with THE CASE OF THE SLAIN SOPRANO, a finalist in the 2018 Wishing Shelf Book Awards. Twelve books have followed in that series.

Let’s start by talking about your latest release in the Augusta McKee series: THE CASE OF THE SINISTER STRANGER – tell us what it’s about!

SUSAN MOORE JORDAN: The “Sinister Stranger” in the title is a man who was one of nearly a million Germans who relocated to the U.S. after the second World War. One of my favorite things about writing is researching, and since the Augusta McKee series moves forward with each novel, this book is set in Cincinnati in 1971. Learning about the influx of Germans to this country which actually began immediately following the war gave me a thought as to why this happened. A young clarinetist, Lukas Bechmann, who believes his father died in Germany during the war is suddenly confronted by a man who uses the name Henry Freeman and claims he is Lukas’ father. Freeman first appears on the scene when Lukas is at his mother’s funeral mass. So…who is he really? Could he be Lukas’ father? Could his mother have lied to him about his father having died, and if so, why?

VENTRELLA: Where did the idea to do this series originate?

MOORE: My first books were set in the 1950s and 1960s, and all grew from my first novel entitled HOW I GREW UP. Two were set in the Vietnam War and were about brothers who had both served.

I took a break and read several Agatha Christie and Dorothy Sayers mysteries and found them intriguing and enjoyable, and wondered if I could successfully write in that genre. I decided to set my series in Cincinnati in the 1960s … which is where I lived at the time. Cincinnati is one of the most musical cities in not only this country, but in the world, and I had attended music school there and been a secretary to the director of a performing arts organization situated on a Catholic women’s college. I’d spent time with opera singers and high-powered musicians and the idea for Augusta McKee grew from those associations. “Augusta” because I liked the name (and she insists people use Augusta, no nickname … until Detective Malcolm Mitchell comes into her life). “McKee” was my mother’s maiden name, and she was an admirable lady. So I believe my McKee mysteries are unique, a female amateur sleuth who is an accomplished musician. And music is a part of each of the mysteries in some way.

VENTRELLA: What kinds of readers do you think would be interested in your book? In other words, whose work do you think your book is comparable to? (“If you like X, then you’ll love Augusta McKee!”)

MOORE: I have had some readers tell me that they have compared Augusta to other famous lady sleuths in the mystery genre. But I believe in some ways she’s definitely unique.

VENTRELLA: Music plays a large part in your books. Who do you like to listen to? What music inspires you?

MOORE: I do prefer classical music, and opera is my favorite. Favorite operas are those from the romantic era, such as operas by Puccini and Verdi. However, I listened to a lot of folk artists when I was writing my book JAMIE’S CHILDREN as my character Niall Logan aspired to be such a performer. Gordon Lightfoot is a favorite, as is John Denver. “Annie’s Song” is a great composition, imho.

VENTRELLA: Your work even got the attention of the Today Show and they interviewed you! Do you have a favorite among your books?

MOORE: Twenty books is a lot, but I’d like to speak about two in particular … the one that was the most challenging to write and the other was the most fun. After I wrote MEMORIES OF JAKE, a book written from the POV of Jake’s brother Andrew, a number of my beta readers (nice folks who are willing to read a book in its formative stages and offer suggestions) were quite taken with the character Jake. One of them even commented she was sure she’d met Jake somewhere.

That kind of a reaction definitely indicated Jake needed his own book, so I embarked on MAN WITH NO YESTERDAYS … so entitled because Jake suffers from amnesia. And for some reason I decided to write it in the first person from his POV. Think about that for a minute! Here I was, a grandmother, deciding to write from the POV of a young Green Beret. The book covers many years, from Jake’s time in Vietnam until he leaves the country and moves to Canada, trying to find himself and recover his memory. So it was a real challenge.

Interestingly enough, my long time editor is actually a friend from many decades ago when we were in junior high school together in Oak Ridge, TN. We reconnected I think about 15 years ago when she visited her brother who lived in East Stroudsburg at the time, and after Ashleigh Evans read HOW I GREW UP, she offered to be my editor, so we’ve done 19 books together. She never hesitates to let me know when she feels I’m wandering “off-topic” and offers valuable suggestions along with her careful corrections.

MAN WITH NO YESTERDAYS challenged us both, but it’s the book that has received the most reviews/ratings and I have heard a number of times from either servicemen from the Vietnam War or their family members how much this book meant to them. I can’t imagine having a greater compliment.

The one that was most fun was book 8 in the McKee mysteries, THE CASE OF THE BOGUS BEATLE. My editor Ashleigh had found an old article in a Cincinnati newspaper about a near-disastrous Beatles concert at Crosley Field in Cincinnati in 1964, and it prompted a plot about a young voice student of Augusta’s who resembled George Harrison, and he liked pretending he was Harrison. So the night of that concert he dressed as Harrison and got a lot of attention … only some of that attention was from a couple of recently-released, not-too-bright “hoods” who decided he really was George Harrison and kidnapped him.

The climax of the story was a car chase from downtown Cincinnati to the city’s Eden Park. Using my memory of making that drive and Google Maps, I wrote the car chase. When I wrote the first book in the series I had connected with a retired Cincinnati police detective who has been my consultant for all twelve books … and I loved that Steve Kramer and his wife Pat actually drove the car chase to be sure it would work! No murder victim in this book, so definitely lighter than most of them.

Finding your voice

One of the most important things a writer has to do is find their voice. That’s what’s going to make your work stand out among all the other writers out there.

I remember when I was a freshman in college, taking an English course, and submitted a story I had written for an assignment. “Hm,” the professor said, glaring at me over her glasses, “I see you’ve been reading a lot of Kurt Vonnegut lately.”

Hey, I was young, but her comments did hit me. I was copying someone else’s voice in my story—a very identifiable voice at that. I hadn’t yet found my own voice—my own unique way to tell a story.

So it goes.

That’s what really makes the best fiction enjoyable. It’s the person telling it that makes the difference; it’s why two people could witness the same event and one could relay it to you in a way that captures your attention and another puts you to sleep. It’s why two people could tell the same joke and one gets tremendous laughter and the other silence.

That only comes with practice with your own personality showing through, and I’m not sure if that is a skill that can be taught. But you need to keep that in the back of your mind as you write. If you’re trying to copy someone else’s style, you’ll fail and readers will realize it.

Your voice is a combination of your experience, your word choices, your way of looking at the world, your sense of humor or tragedy … it’s you. It’s what makes you unique, and that should come across in your writing.

So how do you find your own voice? One technique I’ve heard used is to literally try to copy someone else’s work. After a while, you get sick of it and you’ll find that your own voice will try to take over, and that’s a good thing. I’m not sure if that would work for everyone, but if that’s what it takes to break your real voice out, more power to you.

Honestly, I think the only real way to is to just write write write (as I’ve been saying all along on this blog) and eventually your natural voice will come out, as the words flow. Find a way to make your work read like you and only you.

I interviewed Nancy Springer a while ago, and she made a comment I think is very relevant. (In case you don’t recognize the name, she’s the author of many successful books, and her “Enola Holmes” series was made into films.) She said, “Students are usually anxious to ‘find their voice.’ I tell them that voice is just personality on paper. I tell them to let their personality flow out of their head, down their arms, and out through their fingers, onto the paper – or, I guess, the keypad? Anyway, some are able to do this, so they could become terrific writers, right? Nope. Sometimes students who have really and truly found their voice are just plain dull, because that’s the way they are, personally. But if a writer doesn’t find their voice, then how can readers relate? So, no, I don’t think everyone can become a good writer.”

I am not sure how to fix the problem of some people just being “dull”—but if you think that is your problem, shake it up. Do something unusual. Break your preconceived notions, have your characters do outrageous things, pretend you are possessed and write like you never would have before, and maybe the final result will surprise you and your inner voice will shine through.

My 2025 Philcon Schedule

It’s time for Philcon, Philadelphia’s oldest literary convention. It’s in New Jersey.  (Look, it was cheaper, okay?)

I’ve been a guest at Philcon for years, and it’s always great to go back there and see so many of my friends. This year’s event will be on the weekend of November 21-23.

If I’m not on a panel, you’ll probably find me at the Fantastic Books table in the Dealer’s Room.

Reading (Friday 7 pm): I plan on reading my short story “Horseman, Horseman, Horseman and Horseman, Attorneys at Law”. With Anna Kashina and Robert J. Sawyer.

Opening Ceremonies & Meet The Pros (Friday 8 pm): A great time to meet all the guests!

Meet the Editors (Saturday 11 am): Magazine and small press editors discuss what goes into creating their publications, from the economics of staying viable in the electronic age to getting appropriate submissions. With Neil Clarke, Ef Deal, Ty Drago, and Bjorn Hasseler. (I’m the moderator)

Ninja, Pirate, Monkey, Robot (Saturday 1 pm): Four panelists are assigned character archetypes and presented with questions about how they’d handle different situations in an hilarious competition of wit, humor, and knowledge. The audience decides who wins for the year based on the ingenuity – and humor- of their responses. Moderated by the most-winningest pair, D and Deli, formerly known as The Pax Twins!  With Tobias F Cabral, Melody Cryptid, Shara Donohue, Odele Pax, and Hildy Silverman.

How do I get Publishers to Notice Me? (Saturday 3 pm): How do you stand out when EVERYBODY is trying to stand out? How much does having a literary agent actually help with the process? What things should you absolutely NEVER do, unless your intent is to alienate yourself from the world of professional publishing? With Neil Clarke, Aaron Rosenberg, and Ian Randal Strock. (I’m the moderator)

Soft vs. Hard Magic Systems (Saturday 7 pm): Both systems have pros and cons, from the infinite possibilities of soft magic systems like in Lord of the Rings, to the repeatable and calculated success of the Mistborn series. Join our panelists as they break down how to decide what works best for your story. With Danielle Ackley-McPhail, Harry “Jack” Heckel, and Storm Humbert.

Assembling an Anthology (Sunday 11 am): Anthologies are typically organized around a theme that ties together stories written by different authors, and requires a different approach than writing a novel or putting together a collection of your own short fiction. What unique challenges do anthology editors face, and how do they conquer them? With Danielle Ackley-McPhail, Neil Clarke, Alex Shvartsman, and Ian Randal Strock. (I’m the moderator)

(From a previous Philcon!)

Using AI to write your story

Don’t. Dear whatever god(s) you believe in—just don’t.

Artificial intelligence can do some good things, but being creative isn’t one of them. If you use AI to write your story, you’re stealing other people’s creativity, and you’re not going to get a very good result.

And editors can tell. It’s not well-written. It’s full of cliches, has no original ideas, and there’s no poetry in the words.

Is that what you want? Predictability? No surprises in your work? Something so basic that even a computer could write it in your sleep? Publishing that would make you proud of your accomplishment?

AI can be useful for research, and, let’s face it, it’s not going away. It’s going to get better and more reliable—but we’re not there yet. Remember, all AI does is grab stuff from the internet, and the internet is full of crap. AI doesn’t know if something is “fake news” but hey, it may help you get started in your research as long as you realize what it gives you may be completely wrong.

(As an aside, I gave Google’s AI the prompt “Why you should not use AI to write your stories” and here’s what I got: “Unlike you—an author—AI won’t produce an original idea, a compelling plot twist, or a unique structure. If you rely on AI to write your book—or significant portions of it—that content will likely be predictable, generic, and, frankly, boring.” I agree with that predictable, generic, and frankly boring response.)

AI is based on statistics, not creativity. It predicts what the next most likely word will be (like your phone predicts your texts) and carries that to the extreme, where it can predict what the most likely plotline will be.

Sadly, some people think that AI is an easy way to get rich quick. You pop in an idea, and the computer spits out a story for you that you can self-publish (because no legitimate publisher will take it) and soon, people will buy it! How easy! The people who do that have no desire to be writers—they just think it’s a way to make money.

And then the stuff doesn’t sell, because it’s crap. Oh, it may make a few dollars, but no one is going on lavish vacations with the money earned from AI stories.

So what about using it as a tool, as a way to figure out a plotline? Once more, you’re relying on a system that has no creativity of its own. All it can do is steal the creativity of others. It might give you an idea for resolving a plotline that has been done a hundred times before, and even if you don’t recognize where the idea came from, some reader somewhere will.

I like to talk about stuff I’m writing with creative people and not robots, because sometimes, by talking it out, I can figure out a major plot point or otherwise work out a problem I was having with the story. Talking to boring people doesn’t help me at all. Talking to people who have no creative spark won’t give me what I need. And AI has no creative spark.

A lot of what editors find in AI submissions are stories that don’t make sense. The AI doesn’t know right from wrong, it doesn’t know what works, it doesn’t understand pacing and foreshadowing and the techniques writers use to make the story come alive. It just spits out stuff based on what it steals on the internet, and like AI artwork, sometimes it has too many fingers. Neil Clarke, award-winning editor of Clarkesworld magazine, says it this way: “AI can’t do subtext. It does very flat stories. Sometimes it will miss a plot point. It will hop over something that would be obvious, but it doesn’t know, because it doesn’t know anything.”

Is it possible that you might submit a story and have the editor reject it because the editor thinks it’s an AI story when it really isn’t? Sure, that’s happened. But what does that tell you? It tells you that your story is predictable, boring, and unimaginative, like an AI story. Keep working at it. You’ll get better. 

It all boils down to what someone said about AI: “Why should I spend time reading a story no one has spent time writing?”

The Lies We Tell Others!

Lies.

We all tell them–sometimes to keep the peace, other times to stir the pot, occasionally to save face, or just for fun.

In this anthology, co-editor Sahar Abdulaziz and I got members of our local writing group (the Pocono Liars Club) to submit a playful mix of stories where truth takes a back seat and deception takes center stage. From harmless fibs to outrageous whoppers, these tales demonstrate that sometimes lying is an art… and sometimes it’s a disaster waiting to happen.

We then invited a few authors who had spoken to our group before to submit stories as well, so you’ll also read stories from Randee Dawn, Keith R.A. DeCandido, Gregory Frost, Teel James Glenn, Jon McGoran, Alex Shvartsman, Hildy Silverman, and Ian Randal Strock.

Liars Club contributors are Sahar Abdulaziz, John H. Abel, Angel Ackerman, Derek Beebe, Roseann McGrath Brooks, Michael P. Doherty, Heidi Donohue, P.A. Dutchman, Gabrielle Ferrara, Kieran Ferrara, Belinda M. Gordon, Ralph Hieb, Evelyn Infante, Kelly Jensen, Susan Moore Jordan, Michael Karpe, Tristan Robert Lange, Mary Anne Moore, M.C. Ryder, and me!

Go on–get the book. We promise you’ll love it.

(Would we lie to you?)

Order your copy here!

Free Writers Workshop

The Pocono Liars Club is sponsoring another free writers workshop in a few weeks. Click here to read up on the details!

My Capclave 2025 Schedule

Next weekend (September 19 – 21), I will once more be a guest at the Capclave convention in the DC suburbs. Capclave is a fun convention whose motto is “where reading isn’t extinct”! It’s a great way to meet authors, listen to readings, attend panels, and hang out at the bar until 3 am. When I’m not on a panel, you’ll probably find me at the Fantastic Books table in the dealer’s room.

Anyway, here’s my panel schedule.

Superheroes Versus the Law (Friday 6 pm): In what ways do superheroes like Batman, Superman, Spiderman, and Daredevil break the law? How can they change their normal operations to become more legal? Our panel of lawyers and informed civilians will discuss the legal ramifications of super-vigilantes and what advice they would give them.  With fellow panelists Catherine Green, Sherin Nicole, and Zack Be.

The Eye of Argon (Friday 10pm): The reading of the worst story ever written (and for which I edited a sequel!) With fellow panelists Ide Hennessey, Ian Randal Strock, and Jean Marie Ward.

Common SF/Fantasy Tropes (Friday 9 pm): Authors often use tropes as shorthand to push the plot forward. But when overused, they can make a story feel too predictable. Should writers avoid tropes entirely, or can authors strike a balance between creativity and genre expectations? Which tropes are overused, and what are examples of beneficial tropes in current novels, short stories, films or TV? How can (or should) writers free a story from tropes and create more complex and original works? With fellow panelists Doc Coleman, Morgan Hazelwood, Charles Oberndorf, and Joshua Benjamin Palmatier.

The Role of Editors (Saturday 2 pm): Editors tell all. What do editors do and why are they necessary?  How do different editors approach editing and how hands-on can (or should) they get? What are the best practices for editors and how do short story editors differ from book editors? What are editors looking for? How can a writer get the best possible editing? Writers and editors share their experiences with the editing process. With fellow panelists Scott H. Andrews, Michael J. DeLuca, Mike McPhail, and Wendy Delmater Thies.

Michael A. Ventrella Reading (Sunday 10 am): I am still deciding what to read so come in and be surprised.

Small Press, Self-Publishing or Big Press (Sunday 12 noon): Authors have options for their publisher — small press, self-publishing, or big press. What are the advantages and drawbacks of each method? How can an author choose which to try? How can a new writer get started with each? With fellow panelists Shahid Mahmud, Mike McPhail, Ian Randal Strock, and Nathan W. Toronto.

2025 Milford Readers and Writers Festival

I’ve been honored to be asked to participate in this year’s Readers and Writers Festival in Milford, Pennsylvania the weekend of September 12th.

I’ll be hosting a panel called “Is Your Utopia My Dystopia?” and I’ve been preparing for it by paying attention to the Trump administration. No! Sorry! By reading about dystopian novels.

Anyway, I hope to see some of you there! Click the link above for details.