Interview with author C.M. Waggoner

MICHAEL A. VENTRELLA: I’m pleased to be interviewing C.M. Waggoner today! C.M. has four books out so far and my wife and I have loved each one. She grew up in rural upstate New York, where she spent a lot of time reading fantasy novels in a swamp. She studied creative writing at SUNY Purchase and lived in China for eight years before moving with her husband to Albany. Her web page is http://www.cmwaggoner.com.

Let’s start by talking about THE VILLAGE LIBRARY DEMON HUNTING SOCIETY. Where did the idea originate?

C.M. WAGGONER: Way back in 2020 I went on a quarantine-induced Murder She Wrote binge and was struck anew by the absurdity of the common cozy mystery trope that an absolutely unhinged number of murders can occur in an adorable little village/in the vicinity of one specific elderly lady or kindly old vicar or whoever without anyone stopping to ask what on earth is going on here. I considered possible explanations and thought that “something supernatural is afoot” was the most fun, and here we are!

VENTRELLA: That one is more of a mystery than previous books … how was writing a mystery different for you?

WAGGONER: Writing a mystery was really a test of my plotting and organizational skills! It requires a ton of attention to detail and discipline in terms of making sure that all of the clues, red herrings, and suspects all come together by the end of the book, and that the reader neither guessing everything way ahead of the detective nor feels like the author cheated by withholding important information or relying on too many implausible coincidences to make the mystery work. I think writing that book was hugely educational for me, and I’ve carried some of the skills I learned from writing a cozy mystery into a new project that’s more of a political fantasy.

VENTRELLA: Humor also plays a large role in your books. They aren’t comedy novels by any means, but there are certainly light-hearted moments. Some authors find accomplishing that difficult. Is this something one can learn or do you think it comes naturally?

WAGGONER: Humor is one of my favorite things to write, so it tends to leak into even my more serious books! Partly it comes naturally to me, but I think that reading a lot of really sharp funny writing can do a lot to help you understand how to craft a joke that lands on the page, which is a totally different skill than being the funny friend at a party. Voraciously reading authors like P.G. Wodehouse, Terry Pratchett, Douglas Adams and Oscar Wilde taught me a ton about different ways to be funny in writing.

VENTRELLA: Your novel UNNATURAL MAGIC deals a bit with prejudice and discrimination. When you set out to prepare a story, do you have any specific goals about these kinds of issues or does it just flow naturally from the plot?

WAGGONER: Because UNNATURAL MAGIC is so centered on interactions between humans and trolls, I thought that I would have to consider how stereotypes and prejudice would show up in those relationships if I wanted the world to feel real and lived-in. When I’m doing that kind of worldbuilding I try to think about patterns across history and human behavior and how they would manifest in my imaginary world instead of pasting in actual real-world dynamics with the serial numbers filed off. Often that means that things change as I write, and I then sometimes adjust the plot to fit what feels truest to the society I’ve built.

VENTRELLA: THE RUTHLESS LADY’S GUIDE TO WIZARDRY has delightful worldbuilding, including an undead mouse that goes “bong.” I can certainly imagine many more stories in that world, even if not with Dellaria. Is that a possibility?

WAGGONER: As it happens, I recently finished writing a new book set in Leiscourt! It’s about a new set of characters and is kind of a departure in tone, but sharp-eyed readers might recognize a few references and landmarks from my previous books.

VENTRELLA: In the same vein, I note that you haven’t written any sequels to any of your books, unlike many authors. Tell us why!

WAGGONER: I tend to write stories in which the characters go through what feels to me like a complete emotional arc, and so far I haven’t planned any plots that would take multi-book arcs to complete. That said, I try to write endings that suggest an open-ended future for the characters, so if an exciting idea for a sequel to one of my books comes to me one day I wouldn’t be opposed to writing it!

VENTRELLA: Tell us about your latest book, THE SOMEWHAT WICKED WITCH OF BRIGANDALE.

WAGGONER: It’s my most straightforwardly comic book yet, which was exciting for me – I love writing comedy and it was so much fun to lean into that aspect of my writing for this one. The idea for THE SOMEWHAT WICKED WITCH OF BRIGANDALE came from me thinking about the trope of the humble farm boy or girl being the chosen one or the secret heir to the throne, and how comically unprepared said farm boy would actually be to govern an entire nation-state. In the book, a witch named Gretsella discovers that her kind, handsome, and deeply loved (if not particularly bright) adopted son Bradley is the One True King, and then has to follow after him and clean up his mess when it turns out that he’s totally unqualified for the position.

VENTRELLA: My first novel was about the old trope of the “chosen one” as well, and in mine, the problem is that he’s not the chosen one, but everyone thinks he is! So I clearly like those kinds of twists on the story.

Who is your favorite character out of all your books?

WAGGONER: I’m currently pretty desperately in love with a set of three characters from the book I’m working on right now and the male lead of another completed work, so I’m really looking forward to getting to gush about them at some point. From my published books, Delly and Tsira are both pretty close to my heart, and Gretsella from THE SOMEWHAT WICKED WITCH OF BRIGANDALE was a blast to write too!

VENTRELLA: How do you tend to classify your work? I know some authors don’t like being pigeonholed into “romantasy” or “science fiction” or whatever fits on a bookstore’s category. What do you think of when your work doesn’t quite fit any specific genre?

WAGGONER: I feel like even before I debuted I knew that “hard to categorize” was kind of going to be my lane, so I try not to fret about it! I think the biggest throughline between all of my stuff is that I like to take a genre trope and ask, “what if I took this seriously? How does that play out?” In UNNATURAL MAGIC it was the trope of female humans being the romantic prize for non-human beings: I reversed the genders and then asked, “How would this actually feel for the people involved?” In THE RUTHLESS LADY’S GUIDE TO WIZARDRY I wanted to do a psychologically realistic portrait of a “fantasy rogue,” where stuff like class and trauma doesn’t disappear when it gets inconvenient to the plot.

There’s something like that going on in all of my books, no matter how funny or serious the tone is. I love feeling like I’m in active conversation with the stories that came before mine and playing with or pressure-testing genre conventions.

VENTRELLA: I see that you were in China for many years. How does that influence your perception of the world and how does that affect your writing?

WAGGONER: I think that having lived in a very different culture and operated in my second language for a long time (and having married into that culture!) has given me a little bit of a leg up in terms of intuitively understanding what it actually means to move between cultures and languages. A lot of fantasy tends to gesture at the existence of different languages or cultures for worldbuilding purposes but never dig into how stuff like translation or operating in a second language actually works and feels in daily life. I’m constructing a little conlang for an upcoming book and doing a lot of stuff with cross-cultural confusion and misunderstanding on the page, and I think having a living understanding of how that feels has made the writing process much easier.

VENTRELLA: Are you attending any conventions or doing any public appearances we should know about? Do you enjoy doing those things?

WAGGONER: I’m going to be speaking to a book club and appearing at a public library this fall, and I’m hoping to do a local “adult book fair” this year, so anyone interested should keep an eye on my socials for more info. I really love meeting and chatting with readers (and fellow writers!) whenever I get the opportunity. “In conversation” events and smaller gatherings at bookstores and libraries are usually my favorite, and I’ve also enjoyed teaching writing workshops. I’m less of a convention gal personally – they kind of overwhelm me! – but getting to attend and meet so many lovely people is still very cool and special. I just need to lie down for a while after I leave!

VENTRELLA: How much of writing is innate? In other words, do you believe there are just some people who are born storytellers but simply need to learn technique? Can anyone become a good writer?

WAGGONER: I think that anyone can at least be a competent writer, and that the first step is probably just reading a lot. You also need to either have or develop an ability to be a little ruthless in your appraisal of your own work and to fully absorb and consider productive feedback.

VENTRELLA: How do you make your protagonist a believable character? What’s the best way to make the antagonist a believable character?

WAGGONER: I think that the answer is the same for both of these – you have to figure out who this person really is – what she wants, what she fears, how she imagines herself, what lies she tells herself to keep going, etc.– and then constantly ask yourself as you write how this particular person would actually react to these specific circumstances. If I can’t arrive a my planned plot without the character starting to act like a totally different person, then I know that I need to change something – either I need to rethink who this person is or the plot needs to change to fit.

VENTRELLA: Which of your characters was the hardest to write and why?

WAGGONER: I’m currently writing a character who is extremely contained, composed, formal, and careful with his speech, and is mostly speaking in his third language throughout the book. I find myself rewriting his dialogue over and over again to try to get it exactly right.

VENTRELLA: Do you think readers want to read about “believable” characters or do they really want characters that are “larger than life” in some way?

WAGGONER: I don’t think it has to be one or the other! A lot of my favorite historical figures were both, and I also love that kind of character in fiction. For instance, right now I’m creating a minor antagonist for a book who’s loosely inspired by Huey Long. If I made the guy too much like the real Huey I’m pretty sure I would get lots of Goodreads reviews talking about how the populist politician character was way too over-the-top and unrealistic.

VENTRELLA: What makes your fiction unique? In other words, what is it about your stories that makes them stand out against all the other similar stories out there?

WAGGONER: I’m probably not the best judge of this, but readers who email me tend to comment on the humor, very distinct character voices, my interest in class dynamics, and how sort of ambiently/incidentally queer a lot of my books feel.

VENTRELLA: What is your writing process? Do you outline heavily or just jump right in, for instance?

WAGGONER: I usually have at least a loose outline before I start writing, because I’ve learned from bitter experience that if I don’t have a strong sense of how everything will play out I’m pretty likely to never finish the book. I usually don’t outline every single scene beat for beat though – usually things change enough as I go that trying to micromanage things in advance ends up a waste of time.

VENTRELLA: Do you find yourself creating a plot first, a character first, or a setting first? What gets your story idea going?

WAGGONER: I usually have a loose idea or concept first, sometimes just an image. For example, for my current WIP I spent a few years chewing over the idea of a woman who was involved in overthrowing an evil empire years earlier having to travel to the capital to work at a failing institution in the new government she helped to instate. From there the plot, character and worldbuilding all develop pretty concurrently – people are formed by their societies and culture, so you can’t have the person without the setting, and plot is created by the protagonist moving through her world, so you can’t have the plot without either of those. At the same time, the plot is the engine of the book, so you need it to determine what needs to exist in the characters and setting to make it all work. Thus: all at once!

VENTRELLA: Writers are told to “write what you know.” What does this mean to you?

WAGGONER: No one ever seems to agree on what this means, but for me it’s something like: don’t publish a book you’d be embarrassed to let a real expert on the subject read. If you don’t already deeply understand the topic, figure out how much of it needs to be on the page and do your best to make it convincing. If the idea of the real expert reading it makes you think “they’ll know that this isn’t meant to be a realistic reflection of real-world XYZ” or “they’ll be able to tell I did my research,” you’re probably safe. If the idea of the expert reading it makes you feel uncomfortable, preemptively exhausted, or defensive, you might want to reassess the project.

VENTRELLA: What do you do to avoid “info dumps”?

WAGGONER: My strong preference as both a writer and a reader is for the book to just throw you into the deep end and only explain things when it makes sense for the narrator to be thinking about it. Hilary Mantel, Sarah Waters, N.K. Jemisin, George R.R. Martin and Susanna Clarke all do this exceptionally well, in my opinion. None of them will sit the reader down and spend two pages to explain that in this society the color of your boots indicates your profession, they’ll just have their protagonist notice that someone is wearing purple boots and think “Oh, he’s a tailor.” The tricky thing is that I sometimes take this too far and annoy readers who want a bit more time to get the lay of the land before I have my protagonist set a city guard’s skirt on fire with her mind.

VENTRELLA: What’s the worst piece of writing advice you ever got?

WAGGONER: I think that most one-size-fits-all advice about the writing process itself is pretty useless. “Never edit as you go” or “write messy first drafts” is apparently very valuable to some people but would do nothing for me but drive me crazy while messing up my workflow. “Experiment until you figure out what lets you finish writing readable books” makes more sense to me. No one cares whether you sat down to write for two hours every morning with a fountain pen at a beautiful desk overlooking the sea, or wrote five thousand words on your laptop at your local Applebee’s once per week, or wrote with your thumbs on your phone in the bathtub (guilty) when they’re reading the finished product.

VENTRELLA: What’s the best piece of writing advice you ever got?

WAGGONER: When I was in college Tony Kushner came to my school to give a talk, and I lined up at the end to get my copy of Angels in America signed and ask him what advice he had for a creative writing student. He told me to go out into the world and have actual experiences that could serve as material. I think I followed his advice, and also think that he was completely right.

VENTRELLA: What advice would you give to a starting writer that you wish someone had given to you?

WAGGONER: Writing books is like any other skill. The more you practice the better and easier it tends to get.

VENTRELLA: Who do you like to read? Who are your favorite authors?

WAGGONER: I read pretty widely, so this is a hard question to answer, but some that come to mind are Charles Dickens, P.G. Wodehouse, Raymond Chandler, Sarah Waters, Hilary Mantel, Sarah Perry, Diana Wynne Jones, Kazuo Ishiguro, Terry Pratchett and Erik Larson.

VENTRELLA: With a time machine and a universal translator, who would you invite to your ultimate dinner party?

WAGGONER: I’d want to do a long series of dinner parties to meet all of the people I’d like to talk to, but I’d start things off with an intimate dinner with Hildegarde of Bingen, Oscar Wilde, Zheng He, Julie D’Aubigny, P.G. Wodehouse, Julia Child, John E. Douglas, Attila the Hun, Nellie Bly, a librarian of Alexandria, and a Neanderthal.

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Fighting tyranny with great stories

OK, you know that groups like the ACLU and Pro Publica are filing lawsuits and doing everything they can to fight Trump’s lawlessness, right? Well, if you’re not the kind to want to just give your money to these groups, how about buying a book with great science fiction and fantasy stories from some of the genre’s top writers?

You’ll get some wonderful stories to read so your money is well spent. Since every one of the authors in this book have donated their stories, all the profits go to the ACLU and Pro Publica! See? You’re not only getting some great entertainment, but you’re doing some real good!

This collection includes my humorous story “Horseman, Horseman, Horseman & Horseman, Attorneys at Law” wherein the four horsemen stand up against Satan’s plan. (Any resemblance to the ACLU is unintentional.)

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Learn From My Mistakes

My newest book is now available! Here’s the press release Milherst Publishing sent out:

He’s written more than a dozen books, including the highly acclaimed Terin Ostler/Fortannis fantasy series, the Teddy Roosevelt/steampunk adventure Big Stick, and the horrifically funny Bloodsuckers. He’s also edited a slew of great books, including the Fantastic Books anthologies Release the Virgins and Three Time Travelers Walk Into…, and he co-edited Across the Universe and two volumes of alternate Sherlock Holmes stories in the Baker Street Irregulars series… and that’s just his fiction output. All of that means he’s made-and learned from-the mistakes beginning writers usually make. And now, in this Learn From My Mistakes!, he saves you the time of making those mistakes yet again for yourself.

This collection of essays-written over several years, usually as he was making the mistake he talks about-give a wonderful overview of the entire process, from idea to writing, editing to publishing, and selling the book and building a career. Told in an accessible style, Ventrella is someone you want to have a conversation with, to pick his brain. And this book offers just those suggestions.

Recommended for beginning writers and those who want to level up their writing game.

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“‘Learn From My Mistakes’ highlights the common mistakes writers make, and offers solutions and insight, usually blended with humor and wisdom. It’s a smooth and accessible read chock full of helpful advice for writers of all levels. Michael A. Ventrella describes working with editors, publishers, and promoting your work. Ventrella wears many hats: author, editor, and interviewer, so he brings his extensive experience to these pages. He shares his tips on writing, from choosing a good title, proofreading, crafting an elevator pitch, and querying agents. Though these chapters are interesting, it’s his thoughts on self publishing, promotions, and working with editors where the book really shines. Quotes from other authors provide additional perspectives on each topic discussed, which I appreciated.” – Amazon reviewer

“‘Learn From My Mistakes’ by Michael A. Ventrella is a refreshing and encouraging guide for anyone stepping into the world of writing and publishing. What makes this book stand out is its perfect balance of humor and insight—Ventrella shares hard-earned lessons in a way that feels approachable rather than overwhelming. I thought the inclusion of quotes from established writers was especially powerful, reminding new authors that even the most successful voices once faced uncertainty and missteps. It creates a sense of community and reassurance that you’re not navigating this journey alone. I also appreciated how practical the advice is. Whether you’re just starting out or trying to better understand the publishing landscape, there’s something here that will answer your questions and spark your confidence. Even the cover deserves a mention—it captures the spirit of the book perfectly: inviting, honest, and a little playful. Overall, this is a highly informative, motivating, and easy read that new writers will find both comforting and inspiring. – Sahar Abdulaziz

This book is packed with helpful advice and anecdotes. Insightful and fun to read. This is not a sloggy textbook, but an enjoyable afternoon read. – Amazon reviewer

My Boskone 2026 schedule

Boskone is a major science fiction convention in Boston that I used to attend all the time when I lived there. We moved in 1994 so it’s clearly been a while, but I’ll be back this year, and as a guest panelist instead of just a fan! The Guest of Honor is Greg Cox and my good friend Keith DeCandido is the Master of Ceremonies, and there are lots of other great writers and artists who will be there! Check out this list!

When I’m not on a panel, you’ll probably find me at the Fantastic Books table in the dealer’s room. Here’s my schedule (subject to change):

Tips for Writers Attending Cons (Friday 4 pm): Is this your first convention? Welcome! Stop in and learn about how to attend cons and meet your fans without generating too many “I can’t believe that new writer did that!” stories. Learn why you shouldn’t build pyramids of books in front of you when you’re on a panel and why doing things like using a tablet or a laptop to play videos while you’re on a panel is strictly verboten. With Joshua Bilmes, Janice Gelb, and Tricia J. Wooldridge

Make ‘Em Laugh (Friday 7 pm): In most science fiction/fantasy stories, Donald O’Connor doesn’t fall through a wall to make the audience laugh.  Instead, we might find someone screaming something like “Curse you and your surprising yet inevitable betrayal!” But sometimes, no matter how hard we throw the joke, it just doesn’t land. Humor is subjective which is what makes it
so tricky. Our panel of clowns writers will discuss the mechanics of humor and how to get your reader to laugh. With Randee Dawn, Daniel M. Kimmel, Robert V.S. Redick, and Steven Sawicki

Autographing session (Saturday 2:30 pm): with Theodora Goss and Walter Jon Williams

Censorship and How to Fight It (Sunday 11:30 am): For the first time in ages, our government has spoken out in favor of censorship. Has that impacted your writing (or reading or viewing)? What are some of the effective ways to counter censorship? With Kevin McLaughlin and Melinda Snodgrass

Interview with author Susan Moore Jordan

MICHAEL A. VENTRELLA: Today I’m pleased to be interviewing Susan Moore Jordan! After a lifetime as a musician, Susan wrote and published her first novel in 2013. In THE CAROUSEL TRIO, the author drew from her life experiences as a voice teacher and stage director. In 2017, Jordan shifted her focus to the Vietnam War in  MEMORIES OF JAKE and MAN WITH NO YESTERDAYS, a Finalist in the Wishing Shelf Awards and Semi-Finalist in the Kindle Book Awards.

In 2018, Jordan embarked on “The Augusta McKee Mysteries” with THE CASE OF THE SLAIN SOPRANO, a finalist in the 2018 Wishing Shelf Book Awards. Twelve books have followed in that series.

Let’s start by talking about your latest release in the Augusta McKee series: THE CASE OF THE SINISTER STRANGER – tell us what it’s about!

SUSAN MOORE JORDAN: The “Sinister Stranger” in the title is a man who was one of nearly a million Germans who relocated to the U.S. after the second World War. One of my favorite things about writing is researching, and since the Augusta McKee series moves forward with each novel, this book is set in Cincinnati in 1971. Learning about the influx of Germans to this country which actually began immediately following the war gave me a thought as to why this happened. A young clarinetist, Lukas Bechmann, who believes his father died in Germany during the war is suddenly confronted by a man who uses the name Henry Freeman and claims he is Lukas’ father. Freeman first appears on the scene when Lukas is at his mother’s funeral mass. So…who is he really? Could he be Lukas’ father? Could his mother have lied to him about his father having died, and if so, why?

VENTRELLA: Where did the idea to do this series originate?

MOORE: My first books were set in the 1950s and 1960s, and all grew from my first novel entitled HOW I GREW UP. Two were set in the Vietnam War and were about brothers who had both served.

I took a break and read several Agatha Christie and Dorothy Sayers mysteries and found them intriguing and enjoyable, and wondered if I could successfully write in that genre. I decided to set my series in Cincinnati in the 1960s … which is where I lived at the time. Cincinnati is one of the most musical cities in not only this country, but in the world, and I had attended music school there and been a secretary to the director of a performing arts organization situated on a Catholic women’s college. I’d spent time with opera singers and high-powered musicians and the idea for Augusta McKee grew from those associations. “Augusta” because I liked the name (and she insists people use Augusta, no nickname … until Detective Malcolm Mitchell comes into her life). “McKee” was my mother’s maiden name, and she was an admirable lady. So I believe my McKee mysteries are unique, a female amateur sleuth who is an accomplished musician. And music is a part of each of the mysteries in some way.

VENTRELLA: What kinds of readers do you think would be interested in your book? In other words, whose work do you think your book is comparable to? (“If you like X, then you’ll love Augusta McKee!”)

MOORE: I have had some readers tell me that they have compared Augusta to other famous lady sleuths in the mystery genre. But I believe in some ways she’s definitely unique.

VENTRELLA: Music plays a large part in your books. Who do you like to listen to? What music inspires you?

MOORE: I do prefer classical music, and opera is my favorite. Favorite operas are those from the romantic era, such as operas by Puccini and Verdi. However, I listened to a lot of folk artists when I was writing my book JAMIE’S CHILDREN as my character Niall Logan aspired to be such a performer. Gordon Lightfoot is a favorite, as is John Denver. “Annie’s Song” is a great composition, imho.

VENTRELLA: Your work even got the attention of the Today Show and they interviewed you! Do you have a favorite among your books?

MOORE: Twenty books is a lot, but I’d like to speak about two in particular … the one that was the most challenging to write and the other was the most fun. After I wrote MEMORIES OF JAKE, a book written from the POV of Jake’s brother Andrew, a number of my beta readers (nice folks who are willing to read a book in its formative stages and offer suggestions) were quite taken with the character Jake. One of them even commented she was sure she’d met Jake somewhere.

That kind of a reaction definitely indicated Jake needed his own book, so I embarked on MAN WITH NO YESTERDAYS … so entitled because Jake suffers from amnesia. And for some reason I decided to write it in the first person from his POV. Think about that for a minute! Here I was, a grandmother, deciding to write from the POV of a young Green Beret. The book covers many years, from Jake’s time in Vietnam until he leaves the country and moves to Canada, trying to find himself and recover his memory. So it was a real challenge.

Interestingly enough, my long time editor is actually a friend from many decades ago when we were in junior high school together in Oak Ridge, TN. We reconnected I think about 15 years ago when she visited her brother who lived in East Stroudsburg at the time, and after Ashleigh Evans read HOW I GREW UP, she offered to be my editor, so we’ve done 19 books together. She never hesitates to let me know when she feels I’m wandering “off-topic” and offers valuable suggestions along with her careful corrections.

MAN WITH NO YESTERDAYS challenged us both, but it’s the book that has received the most reviews/ratings and I have heard a number of times from either servicemen from the Vietnam War or their family members how much this book meant to them. I can’t imagine having a greater compliment.

The one that was most fun was book 8 in the McKee mysteries, THE CASE OF THE BOGUS BEATLE. My editor Ashleigh had found an old article in a Cincinnati newspaper about a near-disastrous Beatles concert at Crosley Field in Cincinnati in 1964, and it prompted a plot about a young voice student of Augusta’s who resembled George Harrison, and he liked pretending he was Harrison. So the night of that concert he dressed as Harrison and got a lot of attention … only some of that attention was from a couple of recently-released, not-too-bright “hoods” who decided he really was George Harrison and kidnapped him.

The climax of the story was a car chase from downtown Cincinnati to the city’s Eden Park. Using my memory of making that drive and Google Maps, I wrote the car chase. When I wrote the first book in the series I had connected with a retired Cincinnati police detective who has been my consultant for all twelve books … and I loved that Steve Kramer and his wife Pat actually drove the car chase to be sure it would work! No murder victim in this book, so definitely lighter than most of them.

Finding your voice

One of the most important things a writer has to do is find their voice. That’s what’s going to make your work stand out among all the other writers out there.

I remember when I was a freshman in college, taking an English course, and submitted a story I had written for an assignment. “Hm,” the professor said, glaring at me over her glasses, “I see you’ve been reading a lot of Kurt Vonnegut lately.”

Hey, I was young, but her comments did hit me. I was copying someone else’s voice in my story—a very identifiable voice at that. I hadn’t yet found my own voice—my own unique way to tell a story.

So it goes.

That’s what really makes the best fiction enjoyable. It’s the person telling it that makes the difference; it’s why two people could witness the same event and one could relay it to you in a way that captures your attention and another puts you to sleep. It’s why two people could tell the same joke and one gets tremendous laughter and the other silence.

That only comes with practice with your own personality showing through, and I’m not sure if that is a skill that can be taught. But you need to keep that in the back of your mind as you write. If you’re trying to copy someone else’s style, you’ll fail and readers will realize it.

Your voice is a combination of your experience, your word choices, your way of looking at the world, your sense of humor or tragedy … it’s you. It’s what makes you unique, and that should come across in your writing.

So how do you find your own voice? One technique I’ve heard used is to literally try to copy someone else’s work. After a while, you get sick of it and you’ll find that your own voice will try to take over, and that’s a good thing. I’m not sure if that would work for everyone, but if that’s what it takes to break your real voice out, more power to you.

Honestly, I think the only real way to is to just write write write (as I’ve been saying all along on this blog) and eventually your natural voice will come out, as the words flow. Find a way to make your work read like you and only you.

I interviewed Nancy Springer a while ago, and she made a comment I think is very relevant. (In case you don’t recognize the name, she’s the author of many successful books, and her “Enola Holmes” series was made into films.) She said, “Students are usually anxious to ‘find their voice.’ I tell them that voice is just personality on paper. I tell them to let their personality flow out of their head, down their arms, and out through their fingers, onto the paper – or, I guess, the keypad? Anyway, some are able to do this, so they could become terrific writers, right? Nope. Sometimes students who have really and truly found their voice are just plain dull, because that’s the way they are, personally. But if a writer doesn’t find their voice, then how can readers relate? So, no, I don’t think everyone can become a good writer.”

I am not sure how to fix the problem of some people just being “dull”—but if you think that is your problem, shake it up. Do something unusual. Break your preconceived notions, have your characters do outrageous things, pretend you are possessed and write like you never would have before, and maybe the final result will surprise you and your inner voice will shine through.

My 2025 Philcon Schedule

It’s time for Philcon, Philadelphia’s oldest literary convention. It’s in New Jersey.  (Look, it was cheaper, okay?)

I’ve been a guest at Philcon for years, and it’s always great to go back there and see so many of my friends. This year’s event will be on the weekend of November 21-23.

If I’m not on a panel, you’ll probably find me at the Fantastic Books table in the Dealer’s Room.

Reading (Friday 7 pm): I plan on reading my short story “Horseman, Horseman, Horseman and Horseman, Attorneys at Law”. With Anna Kashina and Robert J. Sawyer.

Opening Ceremonies & Meet The Pros (Friday 8 pm): A great time to meet all the guests!

Meet the Editors (Saturday 11 am): Magazine and small press editors discuss what goes into creating their publications, from the economics of staying viable in the electronic age to getting appropriate submissions. With Neil Clarke, Ef Deal, Ty Drago, and Bjorn Hasseler. (I’m the moderator)

Ninja, Pirate, Monkey, Robot (Saturday 1 pm): Four panelists are assigned character archetypes and presented with questions about how they’d handle different situations in an hilarious competition of wit, humor, and knowledge. The audience decides who wins for the year based on the ingenuity – and humor- of their responses. Moderated by the most-winningest pair, D and Deli, formerly known as The Pax Twins!  With Tobias F Cabral, Melody Cryptid, Shara Donohue, Odele Pax, and Hildy Silverman.

How do I get Publishers to Notice Me? (Saturday 3 pm): How do you stand out when EVERYBODY is trying to stand out? How much does having a literary agent actually help with the process? What things should you absolutely NEVER do, unless your intent is to alienate yourself from the world of professional publishing? With Neil Clarke, Aaron Rosenberg, and Ian Randal Strock. (I’m the moderator)

Soft vs. Hard Magic Systems (Saturday 7 pm): Both systems have pros and cons, from the infinite possibilities of soft magic systems like in Lord of the Rings, to the repeatable and calculated success of the Mistborn series. Join our panelists as they break down how to decide what works best for your story. With Danielle Ackley-McPhail, Harry “Jack” Heckel, and Storm Humbert.

Assembling an Anthology (Sunday 11 am): Anthologies are typically organized around a theme that ties together stories written by different authors, and requires a different approach than writing a novel or putting together a collection of your own short fiction. What unique challenges do anthology editors face, and how do they conquer them? With Danielle Ackley-McPhail, Neil Clarke, Alex Shvartsman, and Ian Randal Strock. (I’m the moderator)

(From a previous Philcon!)

Using AI to write your story

Don’t. Dear whatever god(s) you believe in—just don’t.

Artificial intelligence can do some good things, but being creative isn’t one of them. If you use AI to write your story, you’re stealing other people’s creativity, and you’re not going to get a very good result.

And editors can tell. It’s not well-written. It’s full of cliches, has no original ideas, and there’s no poetry in the words.

Is that what you want? Predictability? No surprises in your work? Something so basic that even a computer could write it in your sleep? Publishing that would make you proud of your accomplishment?

AI can be useful for research, and, let’s face it, it’s not going away. It’s going to get better and more reliable—but we’re not there yet. Remember, all AI does is grab stuff from the internet, and the internet is full of crap. AI doesn’t know if something is “fake news” but hey, it may help you get started in your research as long as you realize what it gives you may be completely wrong.

(As an aside, I gave Google’s AI the prompt “Why you should not use AI to write your stories” and here’s what I got: “Unlike you—an author—AI won’t produce an original idea, a compelling plot twist, or a unique structure. If you rely on AI to write your book—or significant portions of it—that content will likely be predictable, generic, and, frankly, boring.” I agree with that predictable, generic, and frankly boring response.)

AI is based on statistics, not creativity. It predicts what the next most likely word will be (like your phone predicts your texts) and carries that to the extreme, where it can predict what the most likely plotline will be.

Sadly, some people think that AI is an easy way to get rich quick. You pop in an idea, and the computer spits out a story for you that you can self-publish (because no legitimate publisher will take it) and soon, people will buy it! How easy! The people who do that have no desire to be writers—they just think it’s a way to make money.

And then the stuff doesn’t sell, because it’s crap. Oh, it may make a few dollars, but no one is going on lavish vacations with the money earned from AI stories.

So what about using it as a tool, as a way to figure out a plotline? Once more, you’re relying on a system that has no creativity of its own. All it can do is steal the creativity of others. It might give you an idea for resolving a plotline that has been done a hundred times before, and even if you don’t recognize where the idea came from, some reader somewhere will.

I like to talk about stuff I’m writing with creative people and not robots, because sometimes, by talking it out, I can figure out a major plot point or otherwise work out a problem I was having with the story. Talking to boring people doesn’t help me at all. Talking to people who have no creative spark won’t give me what I need. And AI has no creative spark.

A lot of what editors find in AI submissions are stories that don’t make sense. The AI doesn’t know right from wrong, it doesn’t know what works, it doesn’t understand pacing and foreshadowing and the techniques writers use to make the story come alive. It just spits out stuff based on what it steals on the internet, and like AI artwork, sometimes it has too many fingers. Neil Clarke, award-winning editor of Clarkesworld magazine, says it this way: “AI can’t do subtext. It does very flat stories. Sometimes it will miss a plot point. It will hop over something that would be obvious, but it doesn’t know, because it doesn’t know anything.”

Is it possible that you might submit a story and have the editor reject it because the editor thinks it’s an AI story when it really isn’t? Sure, that’s happened. But what does that tell you? It tells you that your story is predictable, boring, and unimaginative, like an AI story. Keep working at it. You’ll get better. 

It all boils down to what someone said about AI: “Why should I spend time reading a story no one has spent time writing?”

The Lies We Tell Others!

Lies.

We all tell them–sometimes to keep the peace, other times to stir the pot, occasionally to save face, or just for fun.

In this anthology, co-editor Sahar Abdulaziz and I got members of our local writing group (the Pocono Liars Club) to submit a playful mix of stories where truth takes a back seat and deception takes center stage. From harmless fibs to outrageous whoppers, these tales demonstrate that sometimes lying is an art… and sometimes it’s a disaster waiting to happen.

We then invited a few authors who had spoken to our group before to submit stories as well, so you’ll also read stories from Randee Dawn, Keith R.A. DeCandido, Gregory Frost, Teel James Glenn, Jon McGoran, Alex Shvartsman, Hildy Silverman, and Ian Randal Strock.

Liars Club contributors are Sahar Abdulaziz, John H. Abel, Angel Ackerman, Derek Beebe, Roseann McGrath Brooks, Michael P. Doherty, Heidi Donohue, P.A. Dutchman, Gabrielle Ferrara, Kieran Ferrara, Belinda M. Gordon, Ralph Hieb, Evelyn Infante, Kelly Jensen, Susan Moore Jordan, Michael Karpe, Tristan Robert Lange, Mary Anne Moore, M.C. Ryder, and me!

Go on–get the book. We promise you’ll love it.

(Would we lie to you?)

Order your copy here!